You only attacked one equal level with full hp and that too was when you outnumbered him. Also I would like to see more editing.

This would be more of an exploration than gameplay vid. If you want to make gameplay, record one scenarion for example, speed up the running scenes, dying, ress timers rtc, let the rest run normally (the fighting)

My guess for the plot (pt1): My guess for the plot: The girl is running from the village with some orcs after her. More orcs, more running. The raid leader tells the orcs to continue the hunt->more running. The orcs give up, little later the girl fades due to exhaustion and the travelling witch hunter finds her and takes her to Altdorf. (Now about the defenders, pretty clear here). It was reported that no one survived, but it was a lie. A courier is going to the emperors palace. (Flashback: The girl is charging at the greenskin raid and slaughters it, seeking for revenge. Now that she has avenged for his village she spends a moment thinking of her father, and the burning building which used to be her home. She also remembers how she ran away, abandoning her parents. She remembers the screams and images of her dying father.) The courier brought the news about the dead greenskin army, and the information leaked from the palace, causing rumors around altdorf.

Or just boost the audio clip volume

Simple is beautiful. Although you could have used some more transactions. I think that the music suits the video.