The editing was more than ok and im not going to rate based on that due to the fact you pointed that you are not focusing on editing. The music is excelent but always know that more than 2' of this tempo always makes a headache on 90% of the viewers. Now the fights? Fighting Semi afk/Semi Braindead oppoments or just one skilled player that has a class destined to end on the floor vs a WH is not a good footage imho. Fix that and you will be on track.

The first machinima if im not mistaken? very good job, you repeated some scenes too many times but im more than fine with that, good editing and a very solid POV on the girl's story. PS:Don't throw RvR movies and go solid on machinimas, it would be a loss on the RvR movie section.

Very good, the "kill bill" theme was a good idea but i prefered the hard core "die in flames" on Burn vol.2 far from this? still the best addition to the BW movie collection.